My View on China’s Higher Educaton

shsdyy

China’s higher education has changed a lot since it was recovered in 1978.Large scale of advanced talents and experts who are brought up by higher education are struggling to achieve the construction of socialist modernization.
   With the university of expansion being carried out ,higher education exposes more and more problems.In my oinion, China’s education exists these problems.
   First of all,there should be a balance between quantity and quality of college’s students.I don’t think it is advsable to increase the quantity of college students without considering the quality.If it goes on developing,there must be large number of unemployed students when they graduate.So controlling this balance is important.
  Secondly,teaching materials of China’s higher education really need to be changed.On one hand,the teaching materials have used for mang years,comparing to the development of society,they are outdated;on the other hand,these teaching materials are worthless for applying to practice.So these teaching materials should be renewed.
  Thirdly,during all the majors of China’s higher education,some are useless and some are repeated.Then,it is necessary to get rid of the useless majors and merger the repeated ones. By this measure,higher education can become systimic and orderly.
  I believe if China’s higher education resolves these problems, it must work out more contribution to the development of society and economy.

shsdyy

回复 1# shsdyy


    this is my homework, i write it just now. welcome to correct it. thank u.

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thinkerfyb

good job!!but i have a question,,"exist"is intransitive verb。 "In my opinion, China’s education exists these problems."i  suggest you can use "has"replace"exists".this is more proper
to the habbit of english use and it's simple but if you must use"exists",that's ok.you can say there exist many problens in china's education.usually,we say sth.exist,not exit sth.i can take some examples."The world exists, whether you like it or not.""Belief in magic still exists."       just my view.thank u!!

shsdyy

回复 4# thinkerfyb


    THANK U.

金璇木雕

China’s higher education had changed a lot since its recover in 1978.Large scale of advanced talents and experts who brought up by higher education are now struggling to achieve the goal of socialist modernization.
   With the university expansion being carried out , higher education exposes more and more problems. In my oinion, China’s higher education involves the following short comings.
   First of all,there should be a balance between quantity and quality of college students.I don’t think it is advisable to increase the quantity of college students without considering the quality.If it goes on, there must be large number of unemployed students when they graduated.So controlling this balance is important.
  Secondly,teaching materials of China’s higher education really need to be changed. On one hand,the teaching materials have been used for mang years,compared to the development of society,they are outdated;on the other hand,these teaching materials are worthless for applying to practice.So these teaching materials should be renewed.
  Thirdly,during all the majors of China’s higher education,some are useless and some are repeated.Then,it is necessary to get rid of the useless majors and merger the repeated ones. Through this measure, higher education may become systematic and orderly.
  I believe if China’s higher education resolves these problems, it must work out more contribution to the development of society and economy.

shsdyy

回复 6# 金璇木雕


    谢谢斑竹了，呵呵，只是时态要不要一致，过去和现在能混用吗、

xniw1212

a piece of shit

海潮之声

'more and more' 不是 formal word ， 我觉得还是用 increasingly 或者 more prevalent