Rocket!!

宽芹慧权

why does Rocket always make us disappointed ?????
As a fan of rocket , You must have a very healthy heart........
otherwise you might be end up with heart attack at any time.....
watching Rocket match is a depressing thing .....

onion1987

be end up ___be ended up   ok?

onion1987

OH,your english is good!!

宽芹慧权

引用第0楼宽芹慧权于2007-05-06 22:23发表的“Rocket!!”:
  why does Rocket always make us disappointed ?????
As a fan of rocket , You must have a very healthy heart........
otherwise you might be end up with heart attack at any time.....
watching Rocket match is a depressing thing .....

otherwise you might" be" end up with heart attack
"be" should be crossed out......

奇迹

not  the  end day of  the world

宽芹慧权

Rocket shouldrenew his blood ,,,.........