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作者: 宽芹慧权 时间: 2007-5-6 22:23
标题: Rocket!!
why does Rocket always make us disappointed ?????
As a fan of rocket , You must have a very healthy heart........
otherwise you might be end up with heart attack at any time.....
watching Rocket match is a depressing thing .....

作者: onion1987 时间: 2007-5-7 00:38
be end up ___be ended up ok?

作者: onion1987 时间: 2007-5-7 00:38
OH,your english is good!!

作者: 宽芹慧权 时间: 2007-5-7 21:05

引用第0楼宽芹慧权于2007-05-06 22:23发表的“Rocket!!”:
why does Rocket always make us disappointed ?????
As a fan of rocket , You must have a very healthy heart........
otherwise you might be end up with heart attack at any time.....
watching Rocket match is a depressing thing .....

otherwise you might" be" end up with heart attack
"be" should be crossed out......

作者: 奇迹 时间: 2007-5-7 23:40
not the end day of the world

作者: 宽芹慧权 时间: 2007-5-11 22:19
Rocket shouldrenew his blood ,,,.........

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