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作者: ironger    时间: 2008-11-25 17:08
标题: Sonnet X
Sonnet X      
Written by zgob   
a sudden knock at my door startled me:
who would visit this lone place so remote?
as i saw a girl with a face gloomy
my heart sank like a heavily wrecked boat
she closed her eyes before she drank
for fearing that she would see her own face
at this moment my mind became all blank
so where were my old love's beauty and grace?
under her darkened brow lay one black eye
her fair cheeks were carved with a tiger's claws
her shining hair was now so dull and dry
and his hard paws had broken her soft jaws
never live with a man for his money
only true love is as sweet as honey
作者: 小猫耳朵    时间: 2008-11-25 18:54
十四行诗
ZGOB撰写
一阵敲门声将我惊醒
谁会远到而来,拜访这个地方
正在这时,我看到一个面孔苍白的女子
我的心臟下沉了像一條沉重被擊毀的小船
她闭上眼睛,她怕看到自己的面孔而受到惊吓
此时我的心仿佛被掏空,
我爱人的美貌和骄傲呢?
她暗淡的眉下只有一只黑色的眼睛,
她的面颊仿佛被虎爪划伤.
她闪亮的头发已经凌乱而干燥
并且他的堅硬爪子傷了她軟的下頜
不要為他的金錢與一個人居住
仅真實的愛是像蜂蜜一樣甜的
作者: 胡不归    时间: 2008-11-25 21:45
这首诗也许对LS 的是个善意的提醒 ?
碰巧  [s:99]
作者: 小猫耳朵    时间: 2008-11-26 09:51
引用第2楼胡不归2008-11-25 21:45发表的“”:
这首诗也许对LS 的是个善意的提醒 ?
碰巧  [s:99]
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