恋风尘 发表于 2006-7-5 18:11

左岸の鱼 发表于 2006-7-5 20:43

简单找了下，第一段的语法和句法错误

today afternoon —— this afternoon

seven classmates and me —— I

seven classmates and me to have—— went to have

a interview —— an

they are saying —— they were saying

a forergner came from Norway—— a forergner who

they are wanting to employ—— they are in needof

who good at computer —— who are/is

understand what they are saying —— were

have slow down —— slown

in other saying ——inother words

havn't learn——learned / learnt


第一段基本时态错误，应该一般过去时为主。
叙述过去的事实时应该使用过去时态。。。。

修改下，就应该表达的清楚点了。。。。。

恋风尘 发表于 2006-7-5 20:54

海蓝色的沙 发表于 2006-7-6 17:09

海蓝色的沙 发表于 2006-7-6 17:12

恋风尘 发表于 2006-7-6 17:58

klebe 发表于 2006-7-7 20:35

let's love the girl to death

blueskymay 发表于 2006-7-8 22:18

chance to success----succeed 用动词可能更好点
另外逗号好象多了点,英文中一般用"."比较多,不象写中文文章哦
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